ChibiRisu-chan ([info]chibirisuchan) wrote,
@ 2005-07-13 22:17:00
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Entry tags:chapter links, side effects

Table of contents for Side Effects
Thanks to the paranoia factor, I'm going to repost everything here as well as at FF.net just in case someone tries again to get me banned -- better safe than sorry!

Plus I can finally have the CORRECT version of chapter 21 posted. The one that includes the songs they were singing. So nyeh, FF.net.



My general disclaimer: I really do appreciate comments! I love hearing what people think about my fics. I'm a strange combination of maniacally shy and review-whore. But I have a bizarrely overdeveloped guilt complex (probably comes from being Lutheran) that says "if you can't reply to every last one of them, you're a bad bad person." And I get so darn much email (six tech support mailing lists) that I just can't turn on the LJ email notifier that says when people leave a comment or my inbox will explode and it'll be very very messy.

I apologize if anybody leaves a comment and I don't reply -- sometimes it's because I honestly haven't seen the comments (which is likely on anything more than a week or so old because I forget counts), sometimes it's because I haven't gotten up the gumption to tackle the entire list of 'em so it's easier just to hide out... often in the latter case, it's because in the mental juggling act of "more fic vs more comments" I figure most people would really prefer to see more fic, and when I've only got x number of hours available, I'd better use it for ficness.

I'm likely to turn off comments on individual chapters and leave this one as the centralized comment spot just so I have some faint chance of getting caught up one of these days! ^^;;

Anyway, thanks again for reading!




Chapter 1
Chapter 2
Chapter 3
Chapter 4
Chapter 5
Chapter 6
Chapter 7
Chapter 8
Chapter 9
Chapter 10
Chapter 11
Chapter 12
Chapter 13
Chapter 14
Chapter 15
Chapter 16
Chapter 17
Chapter 18
Chapter 19
Chapter 20 pt 1
Chapter 20 pt 2
Chapter 21 pt 1 (the REAL version!)
Chapter 21 pt 2
Chapter 22 pt 1
Chapter 22 pt 2
Chapter 23 pt 1
Chapter 23 pt 2



Memo: Text-formatting = NONE plus raw HTML is my friend...

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[info]lazulisong
2005-07-15 01:22 am UTC (link)
You are the only person in this world who can make me read KAKAIRU MPREG.

SQUEEE.

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(no subject) - [info]chibirisuchan, 2005-07-15 06:09 pm UTC

[info]maldaeien
2005-07-16 01:47 pm UTC (link)
*huggles you tightly* This is the most wonderful amusing story by far I have read! (And plan on reading because it breaks my mind to think why Iruka and Kakashi were sent there, I don't think it was for house remodeling issues :P) Go on with the awesome work ;) *more huggles*

Maldy

PS: Hope you don't mind I have added you to my friends' list

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(no subject) - [info]chibirisuchan, 2005-07-16 09:49 pm UTC
(no subject) - [info]maldaeien, 2005-07-16 10:18 pm UTC

[info]telosphilos
2005-07-20 01:41 pm UTC (link)
I just peeked over after you commented on the drabble I posted. Man you have been busy organizing. It takes a fair bit of work to set something up in your livejournal like that after having it on ff.net for so long.

I do hope the next chapter doesn't take 11 months either. We would have to ask Chibi to lick you for that. *snicker* That is really one of my all time favorite scenes. *wink*

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(no subject) - [info]chibirisuchan, 2005-07-21 08:16 am UTC
Fic - (Anonymous), 2005-07-25 01:38 pm UTC

(Anonymous)
2005-08-03 02:25 am UTC (link)
I read every one of your 23 chapters straight...hehehe damn my eyes hurt! ^-^ It's a great story! You make male pregnancy work, I'm even convinced it's plausible! (Got me wanting to be a ninja, so I can henge to a male and experience *that*...I'm a yaoi addict >.< and a very shameless one, with weird fetishes and...hehehe I'm kidding! I'll stop explaining ^-^ I'm probable freaking you out >.<) I like the way you take time to explain how things happen: like the pregnancy, the sealing...coz it makes your story believable in Naruto world, and very original ^-^ I also love your humor, coz it shows in your characters ^-^

Iruka, or rather 'Iruko' is beginning to sound like my mom hehehe ^-^ (Eeew...weird thought [delete delete] with all the nagging and worrying I suppose...but then that's means Iruka's gonna be a great parent - my mom's great! [this is guilt talking hehehe I'm kidding]) But ohhhh s/he has her super super lovable moments, i.e. eating strawberries, blushing, liking the rain - oh wait, that's me, and then blushing some more...I LOOOVEEE blushing Iruka!

I looove Kakashi so so so much much much *hugs scarecrow plushie* his teasing, and jokes and super horny-ness!! hehehe^-^ And the way he takes care of Iruka - he's so attentive, and so caring and thoughtful... And I love their conversations...I wish I could express my feelings that way, have it understood in that way, and to understand the same way... I guess it shows how much two people are really meant for each other, how much they love each other [damn anime! wish they'd show more Iruka and Kakashi scenes...^-^]

And I'm beginning to hate the disruptive teens that are intruding on Kakashi and Iruka honeymoon >.< [kakashiXiruka is LOVE ^-^] But then again it results to more 'kiss and make-out' scenes hehehe ^-^ so it's all good hehehe ^-^

Well...there! It turned out to be such a long comment ^-^ Just shows how much I love your story. I hope you keep on writing it! Good luck with your job, and life! Take care ^-^

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[info]adania_ebonsong
2005-08-28 11:55 am UTC (link)
Wonderful story! I read it months and months ago on ff.net, and then lost track for a while. I was thrilled to find it through SelfReliance! Your story is sweet. And plausable, which is the best thing about Sexy-no-Jitsu.

I just can't help but wonder why they were sent to the village, though. And I was a little confused when I re-read chapter 15 after reading 23. In 15, references seem to be to the 3rd, but then 23 seems to reference Tsunade... Maybe it's just me.

Anyways, I can't wait for more! And thanks for being half of the reason my brain has merrily skipped off to mpreg-land!

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I bow to the master
[info]satisfied_frog
2005-09-28 04:39 pm UTC (link)
I've held off on Naruto for almost 3yrs - the same amount of time my boyfriend has been nagging me to even *look* at it. A friend recc'd your "Side Effects" to me and that was that. I read it all in one sitting, had a strange look on my face the rest of the day and was hooked.


PS I'm supposed to say thank you. but I'll just settle for begging for more

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(Anonymous)
2005-11-02 08:04 am UTC (link)
Chapter 23 had me crying Tears Of Real Soysauce. I'm so glad my friend told me to read this. Great fanfic ^,^!

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Ranting away...
[info]voxem
2006-03-29 11:58 am UTC (link)
I love this fic. Best Kakairu I've read, ever. (and belive me, I've. read. many. So many it's actually quite embarassing. =^^=)

I jus't started rereading it for the third or forth time or so... He. And it keeps getting better. I feel sorry for you though, because you are indeed a fantastic writer, and as a fantastic writer should, you have a lot of fans. And some of these fans evidently are morons, who should go into a closet and hide in shame, or preferably die. But anyway, I wanted to tell you I feel sorry for you. And i don't care if it takes you a fucking year to update, I'm just happy that I'm able to enjoy your writing. And those bastards nagging on you should be THANKFUL, for kami knows that ff.net is full of crappy fanfiction, and for every little glimmering diamond, like you or kittys fics, you meet at least twenty fics who are 1) kliché based ripoffs or 2) so full of grammatic faults that even me, who doesn't even have english as a native language, gets the urge to rip out her hair. Oh, sorry I'm ranting. Eh, hihi. So as I was saying, great fic, I'm a adoring fan of you. Eh, take care.

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Re: Ranting away... - [info]voxem, 2006-03-29 12:00 pm UTC

[info]jbmcdragon
2006-04-07 04:01 pm UTC (link)
*waves* Sorry about not replying via ff.net, but I can't for the life of me figure out hwo make it work now... *peers* Anyway, thank you! :D I've linked Hidden Village here, and I love this fic.

Seriously. I sniffled and everything. How you go from humor to drama in one fell swoop is spectacular. Thank you. :D

J

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[info]theshadowlover
2006-04-25 06:48 pm UTC (link)
...this fic...is the SHIT. O_O it had me giggling hysterically at parts, and your characters are THEMSELVES, and it's just plain awesome. XD

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[info]pinkydbzfan
2006-05-09 09:05 pm UTC (link)
more more, im still not satisified ^^. this is the ( and will probally only be) only mpreg that i will ever read. so at least give us the rest. pweeeese *puppy dog eyes*

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On Chapter 21 pt 1
(Anonymous)
2006-05-25 03:40 am UTC (link)
I have been searching AGES for your fic with the songs with it, since in FFnet it's been cancelled somehow. I was like HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAHAHHA when I saw your lyrics on Naruto's song!!! ANd others too! I'm new here, so I can't seem to find my way well here... But man, you've made up my day yet again! Thankyou!!

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Fantasy suggestion
(Anonymous)
2006-05-25 05:13 am UTC (link)
Hi dude, this is one very special and unique and it got my attention. Hmm, narrating very good, and I must say, the characters are very in their own character(with Sasuke's VERY fitting characteristics still there, and you deserve a well thousand praise for your talents and ideas), or perhaps a bit of change in Iruka which I totaly agree with it... I spent my whole day drinking coffee and reading this one.

And by the way, Sasuke-kun is getting attached to Iruka eh? I was thinking it would be kinky and nice to put Sasuke roughly trying to lover-type (more than a father-son-type feeling it gave me) force up on Iruka after labour, when the sensei's body is pretty again, when Sasuke can't hold back anymore. (wahahahha I better start my own fic,LOL but you, dude, got all the damn good ideas. So I better stay out and keep my fingers crossed and wonder if you'll take this suggestion (please dont be offended) and I must mention, many parts are sewn back together which made this fic firm and very enjoyable, the putting together of Kakashi's lateness in his life ("I told you how much my timing sucks," Kakashi said dryly," and he's comparing his usual lateness with his life(i cant find the chapter but Kakashi said that he was too late for Obito, the Hokage...) was just too hot.

I urge you to move on with a happy heart^^ Cozz many of your thing u write about youself is Auuughhhhhh AAArrrgghhhhh, so cheer up! And make me a good fic! Wahahaahha...!!^^v You have a girl here to cheer for you! By the way, you're a boy or gal? Ugh, doesn't matter much, but if you don't mind, can you tell me your AGE?

Very sincerely,
Horong, 17 year-old girl from FF.net
P.S: and I don't (didn't write)have any fanfic. LOL

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This is such an awsome story!!!!!!!
(Anonymous)
2006-05-28 11:25 am UTC (link)
LMAO THIS IS SO FUNNY XD!!!!!! I absoulutly love it!!! I think I broke a couple of ribs from trying not to laugh. This is such a great story with perfect timing and lovely wordplay. I'm going to keep a watch for any updates ^-^.

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Ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha,ha
(Anonymous)
2006-06-17 07:54 pm UTC (link)
I've only read through chapter 8 and I think it is halleriouse! I've never laughed so hard in my life. I kind of feel sorry for Iruka though. Having to go through pregnancy stages and all. But other than that Kakashi deserves all the beatings he gets from Iruka. After all he hwas the one who got Iruka pregnant and he deserves to be punnished.

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[info]jinxgirl5
2006-07-06 06:28 am UTC (link)
^^ My fangirl brain is simply at a lose for words ^^! *melts into a puddle of fangirl goo which begins bubbling in a manner that sounds like giggling*

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3rd time rereading this story
[info]saelani
2006-07-10 06:21 pm UTC (link)
SO figured i should comment. It was absolutely awesome and is saved so that i can pull it out at random times and read it at work.

You are a goddess of fanfiction.

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Amazing
[info]rendril
2006-07-13 03:33 am UTC (link)
Wow... Lately I've been getting bored with KakaIru fics... but this just blew my mind away. Normally I don't read mpreg, but this was just awesome, so thanks for writing it! I love the way you've portrayed all the characters, especially Iruka's reactions to everything. I absolutely love it. ^^

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side effects
(Anonymous)
2006-08-13 02:26 am UTC (link)
i was wondering if you were going to leave this story were you left it or if you are going to do a sequel were somewhere you metion you were thinking of it because i am one of those people who like to know what happens next and plus i think if thats the end of this story than thats just plain wronge you should have Kakashi finally propose to Iruka and atleast let us know what the baby is and so on

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[info]akuni
2006-08-13 10:46 pm UTC (link)
This is a good review, really! :)

I started out "kinda liking" the idea of KakaIru when I watched the anime. I wasn't going to go out and actively look for fics though because the few I stumbled across were... meh. And generally I am not really a great fan of mpreg either, except for humour.

All of that said - I'm so glad I gave this fic a chance. :D I really enjoyed the characterization and the flow of the story. This is undoubtedly the best Naruto fic I've ever read, and it gives me hope not to abandon the idea of finding good fics for this fandom. :)

I, too, want to know if there's more to the story posted up somewhere. I'm interested to know how the 'punishment' is going, how the proposal will go, how the baby will turn out, and what happens when they go home! :)

I also am dying to know how you did the Table of Contents post. I've got a multi-chap fic that I want to post to my LJ this way but I can't figure out how to do it without spamming entries to my flist and then linking them. Any advice is appreciated. :)

Thanks for the great story!

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(no subject) - [info]akuni, 2008-01-24 05:46 pm UTC

[info]alicorn9
2006-09-02 12:12 am UTC (link)
You know, now that I think about it, this fic was the one that really got me hooked on the KakaIru pairing. They're just so very believably. It's not as if they're perfect, they just fit together so well, because really, who else would put up with such a crazy man as Kakashi other than Iruka, and ... well, no one really understands why Iruka settled for Kakashi, but Iruka loves him and that's enough.

Actually, to be truthful, all of the characters are written well. It's been a while since I actually read your fic, since it's been a while since the last update, but I just did a read through from chapter 1 to 23, and holy cheese on a stick, but you write team 7 so very young. It's really different. Probably that's because you started writing this so 'long ago' that it was normal to write the three genin this immature, but it's fun to read them this way.

I know that I'm the last person who should be asking this because, quite frankly, I can't write fic, but I'd really enjoy and appreciate it if there were more fic. I'm being selfish, I know, but I'm pretty sure that there are a bunch of other people who feel the same way.

And even if you're just going to leave this as a WIP, I'd like to thank you sincerely for writing something that's so profoundly amazing.

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(no subject) - [info]alicorn9, 2006-09-02 12:14 am UTC

(Anonymous)
2006-09-24 07:51 pm UTC (link)
when will the next chapter be out.

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It Rox!!
(Anonymous)
2006-11-05 01:53 pm UTC (link)
*cough* I luv the story....thanx for writing it......^^

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[info]wickedvirtue
2006-11-30 08:35 pm UTC (link)
I *just* found the link to this story on JB's Hidden Village, and my *goodness*, this is really fantastic. Mpreg is hardly ever done well (and, y'know, not solely for laughs) but you managed to make it both plausible and compelling. I can see that it's been quite a while since you posted a chapter, and here's me hoping that real life gives you some time and inspiration to continue this. It's too good to let die on the vine. (Especially at this point!)

Thanks again for the awesome fic.

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wow.
(Anonymous)
2006-12-18 07:03 am UTC (link)
this story is absolutely HILARIOUS! The entire idea of it is just... perplexing, but in a good way. I never even though of something like that ever happening. It's a completely original idea, from my perspective. You did a really great job on this! This is the first comment I've posted about a fanfic, since this is the first time I've felt it neccessary. Yay.

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